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John Williford's avatar

You’re already on the path, but may I recommend Robin Williams’ “The Non-Designer’s Design Book”? I pretty much tell anyone who makes the mistake of standing still in my vicinity for too long. It’s like graphic design 101 in an easy, conversational (and funny) essay.

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J. Claypool's avatar

It was already in my “save for later” list on Amazon!

I have to get it now, right?

Thanks!

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Sr. Padilha's avatar

Instant bookmark

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IIII's avatar

It’s amazing how information management is not considered enough. I like that you look at it through the lens of the reader—opposed to just someone using the book as a reference

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J. Claypool's avatar

Information management is not enough. Maybe. I bet for many readers the moves I discuss in the post won’t make or break their experience.

I think that we receive information in a very automatic way (maybe not effortless, but automatic still).

Yet, you have to use different muscles/different techniques when you give information. I would argue, in fact, that “seeing from your reader’s point of view” is the most difficult part of writing.

Thanks for the kind words!

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Kathy  Utley's avatar

Overwhelmed and inspired. Poetic approach to graphic design, and I am enamored

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Miroku's avatar

So much amazing advices! For a new and beginner lone wolf creator this is gold! Thank you!

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J. Claypool's avatar

Thanks!

What are you working on?

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Miroku's avatar

Curently creating content for Shadowdark and focusing on solo content and supplements! Also wanting to explore another systems for solo play like Kal arath and cloud empress!

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J. Claypool's avatar

Let me know when you get an Itch or DriveThruRPG set up!

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Miroku's avatar

Oh i have an itch!! https://codexgigaspress.itch.io/

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Andrew Leggett's avatar

A great read. I don’t think I will be looking at a book again in the same way now. It’s surprising how subtle changes can influence the subconscious and make the same text somehow more readable and memorable.

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J. Claypool's avatar

This is high praise! Thank you.

It’s crazy isn’t it? Creators are making these subtle moves all the time around us. It’s a subject/approach I love to explore.

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Travis Rodgers's avatar

Really interesting. Some great examples of the concepts that I think really work. But I can't be the only one who didn't have a bad or worse experience reading that first one on the left compared to the right. The left worked perfectly.

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J. Claypool's avatar

Valid point!

I mean, besides the widow word, it could be argued that none of my left side examples are breaking any publishing “rules.”

Over the years I’ve found what I like to see in a layout, and that was what I wanted to share.

All of my “bad” examples could provide a positive reading experience. But… I do think that they each create different experiences. And it’s good to be aware of that as a writer/designer.

Thanks for reading!

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Travis Rodgers's avatar

You’re almost certainly right. I’m a reader. I’m not a designer. My daughter is a graphic designer. She’d show me examples like this. Sometimes I didn’t get it, but there were plenty of examples that totally made sense.

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Kate Korsaro's avatar

wow, very very subtle and informative! thank you!

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Mage Advice's avatar

A very helpful read, lots of details I wouldn't necessarily notice but do effect the overall reading experience!

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Whiskey, Blood and Dust's avatar

I really like this. Nice job. I'd definitely be down to read more.

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J. Claypool's avatar

Thanks!

I started a list of stuff I’ve been learning/discovering about format and layout… and it keeps growing. I’ll probably make another post like this.

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Whiskey, Blood and Dust's avatar

That's an area I'd like to know more about.

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

Thank you for such a great article. As a graphic designer most of it is basic, but you explained everything so well. I liked the importance of get headers. It seems so basic and yet gets overlooked.

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J. Claypool's avatar

Thanks!

It is basic stuff, but I’m a beginner—just sharing what I’ve learned so far.

As someone with more experience in graphic design… is there a formatting or layout move/detail that you would suggest I cover in a future post?

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

You're welcome. Sadly I don't have any suggestions at the moment my day job and my girls got my head fried at the moment.

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J. Claypool's avatar

Oh man! I get it. My two have me spinning, too!

It’s all good!

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

Thank you for being understanding.

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GMaia's avatar

Thanks thanks thanks!!! I am editing the second edition of my rulebook and this post is pure gold!!!

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Pat's avatar

I'm sending this to my wife, errrr, editor, I meant editor, as she goes over the playtest version of my new game before I send it out into the world.

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